I would love to download your faction, but there are so few screenshots, I don't know if the faction is worth the 18 MB it is. I don't know if I want to use time and jumpdrive and harddrive space for this faction. I'm sure Omega will attest to this.
Indeed.
I would recommend one or two good pictures, then perhaps a few links to other images. Also, be descriptive! Have a long post telling every unit and upgrade in detail. Answer the people's questions, and BE DESCRIPTIVE. Remember that people can't go downloading any random faction (or at least people with either [1] limited time or [2] bad internet or even [3] people who like quality of quantity). You want to give the people a reason to play your faction. Show some great work, have detail, etc;
Heck, with enough persuasion, you could sell bikini's to penguins at the south pole!