Author Topic: My indian picture (Read 8871 times)

Gabbe · « **on:** 4 May 2010, 16:10:56 »

Tell me how i could improove the feathers on his head.

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[img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/3238/indianern.jpg[/img]
Its made in GIMP 2.0

wyvern · « **Reply #1 on:** 4 May 2010, 16:14:31 »

, they should be sort of like leaves with, a single stem from which come the bristles

Gabbe · « **Reply #2 on:** 4 May 2010, 16:22:51 »

Anything else i can improove?

wyvern · « **Reply #3 on:** 4 May 2010, 16:23:29 »

the eyes seem crooked

wyvern · « **Reply #4 on:** 4 May 2010, 16:24:13 »

Oh yeah and improve is not spelled with two o's

Gabbe · « **Reply #5 on:** 4 May 2010, 16:34:04 »

messy keyboard, i knew that, and i`ll look into it now (about they eyes and feathers)

Gabbe · « **Reply #6 on:** 4 May 2010, 17:13:26 »

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[img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/6247/indianer.jpg[/img]
Here is the update, was it better? Tell me how to improove please

wyvern · « **Reply #7 on:** 5 May 2010, 14:46:16 »

improve doesn't have two o's and try to centralize the mouth a bit more, I might have a pic on how the feathers should look, its getting better though

Gabbe · « **Reply #8 on:** 5 May 2010, 15:23:10 »

yeah, the first one was horrible...this one is actually decent

wyvern · « **Reply #9 on:** 5 May 2010, 15:27:10 »

Gabbe maybe there should be more feathers, its just a thought but it seems like that indian suffered some feather loss

Gabbe · « **Reply #10 on:** 5 May 2010, 15:29:40 »

Yeah, but im not that good in painting, i`ll try, however it will get messy.

wyvern · « **Reply #11 on:** 5 May 2010, 15:38:03 »

I wouldn't say your that bad, its better then me drawing at any rate

ElimiNator · « **Reply #12 on:** 5 May 2010, 17:27:25 »

Just use gimp, it is easier faster and looks better.

Gabbe · « **Reply #13 on:** 6 May 2010, 16:00:22 »

i use GIMP xd, it syays on the first post.

ElimiNator · « **Reply #14 on:** 6 May 2010, 16:47:48 »

Your kidding me! I thought you said you painted it.

Gabbe · « **Reply #15 on:** 6 May 2010, 16:49:00 »

okaY, then i gimped it

No way ms paint would do a image that good...

-Archmage- · « **Reply #16 on:** 6 May 2010, 17:22:10 »

I think he means painted as in painted.

Nice pic.

Gabbe · « **Reply #17 on:** 6 May 2010, 19:09:52 »

thax

modman · « **Reply #18 on:** 7 May 2010, 01:55:28 »

Are you using layers? I would recommend fading out (somehow) on the edges of the feathers so they look more natural.

Gabbe · « **Reply #19 on:** 7 May 2010, 05:43:24 »

I`ll try that

-Archmage- · « **Reply #20 on:** 7 May 2010, 10:24:18 »

Check this out, it'll help:

Real feather.

And this:
Drawn feather.

wyvern · « **Reply #21 on:** 7 May 2010, 13:30:12 »

Beautiful pics Arch

-Archmage- · « **Reply #22 on:** 7 May 2010, 19:53:10 »

They aren't mine, just found them on Google to show Gabbe something to draw from.

Gabbe · « **Reply #23 on:** 8 May 2010, 19:34:56 »

thx, and now that im ill i don`t have to sell newspapers and i can work more on it

UPDATE:

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[img]http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/6247/indianer.jpg[/img]

ElimiNator · « **Reply #24 on:** 8 May 2010, 21:23:16 »

The feathers still need stems and his one strand of hair looks strange.

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