I think it should start like this:
(Working in the fields) (Keeps fading in and out of different vews)
(Mops his brow)
(Goes toward the well, puts the bucket down)
(up on cliff side road the is a platoon of army maching)
(The boy in the fields hears a loud roar!)
(He drops the bucket and puling out his sword runs toward the forest boarding the fields)
(The king up on the ledge with hiw platoon hears the roar too and pulls out his tellacope)
(The king looks out and through his scope he can see the boy and the (some evil creature) advancing on each other)
(they battle for a wile both getting a few wounds)
(at last the boy wins)
(He wipes his brow and gows into the house)
(Veiw of the king close up Smiles and shake his head,)
(Veiws out and king rids away)...
{fades out, and back in)
{location= Field}
{theme= Night, silent, scary}
{action= "Boy" working in field}
{action= "unknown" walks towards you}
{action= you say: are you the one that was supposed to meet me?
{action= "unknown" says: yes, you must follow me, the king wishes you to a mission}
{action= you say: the king?}
{action= you continue: what does he want to do with me?
{action= "unknown" says: just follow me, the king can explain it himself}
{action= You follow "unknown" till castle}
{location= outside castle}
{theme= night dark, not scary, sounds from within castle}
{action= "unknown" says: okay, just go in the castle, the guards will let you slip past, trust me}
{action= you say: okay, but i blame you if i don`t get in}
{action= "unknown" says: just go in and listen to what the king says}
{action= you walk into castle, leaving "name1" behind}
{action= "name1" walks into town and fades out of visible range}
{location= castle gate}
{theme= night dark, not scary, sounds from within castle}
{action= You look up to the top of the castle at the high towers}
{action= you walk up the stone stairs till the gate}
{action= "guard2" shouts: Halt!}
{action= "guard1" says: we need confirmation your not armed and your permission to enter}
{action= you say scared: I--I don`t have any permission, im just a son of a merchanter}
{action= "guard1" asks: What is your name?}
{action= you answer: My name is (name needed)}
{action= "guard2" says: ah, you may enter dear (name needed)}
{location= inside castle}
{them= bright, outside windows night, comfortable for you}
{action= You look around inside the castle, there are a lot of royal people walking around along with servants and butlers}
{action= You wonder if the king want you to be a servant or butler..}
{action= you walk slowly towards throne room}
{location= throne room}
{theme= Comfortable, bright, no windows outside}
{action= you look around and notice how the people outside suddenly appear to get interest for you}
{action= "king" says: Welcome, I have a need for your assistance in our campaign against the egyptians}
{action= you respond to king: A pleasure to be here, how may I assist you?
{action= "king" becomes sad}
{action= "king" says depressed: All of our generals are out on a mission assembling the army at the eastern frontier against magic}
{action= you ask: I still haven`t figured out how i can help}
{action= "king" says: We need you to be a general in our army, i shall reward you greatly}
{action= you become happy}
{action= you say: I am pleased to serve you my lord!}
{action= the people in the room are clapping and smiling}
{action= you are smiling and are happy}
{action= camera zoom in on your face so no background shows}
{action= camera zoom out and sees masses of soldiers marching}
{location= road, space for army to march}
{theme= day, army marching music playing, drums}
{action= camera films at loactions for viewer to get overview of the number of soldiers [thousands]}
{action= troops leaders shouts at regular basis: march!}
{action= army arrives at destination and stops}
{action= troop leaders shouts: halt!}
{action= army "makes camp", defence structures rise as the soldiers build them.}
{location= armys camp, generals tent}
{theme= night, torches gives light}
{action= you are almost asleep, in a bed, made by fur, thinking}
{action= camera goes before your head/face}
{action= you close your eyes}
{action= View gets blurry and then sharpened again}
{location= your dream, battlefield}
{theme= bright}
{action= soldiers on friendly side wins totally, enemies flees, screaming while they get slaughtered}
{action= as all out of sudden a dragon sweaps over the battlefield and then you can see yourself, burning to death}
{location= Armys camp, generals tent}
{theme= morning, bright, birds singing}
{action= you think: what a strange dream, almost if it were real..}
{action= you walk out of the tent, seeing the army is preparing to leave}
{action= tomorrow you are going to lead the assault against the tower of Zubel, you are nervous]
{location= armys camp}
{theme= morning, bright, birds singing}
{action= you walk down the road from the generals tent to the smaller infantry tents, you see many soldiers smiling to you}
{action= "soldier1" shouts to the mass: Hey, people, the general is here!"}
{action= the soldiers salutes you as you walk down the road}
{action= you feel very proud of yourself, you are certain victory will be our faith}
{location= armys camp, gate}
{theme= morning, bright, birds singing}
Poll