game description for steam

[titi]

For steam we need a 2 texts describing the game. one short description and a long descrition.

Here you can see as an example Teeworlds http://store.steampowered.com/app/380840/?snr=1_7_7_151_150_1
Short Description is below the game image on the right and long one is shown as "about the game" on bottom.

Lets try it here :
https://etherpad.net/p/mgdescription
Feel free to write your own description on bottom but feel free to correct typos and so on in my version too

[andy_5995]

titi, I've heavily edited the short description (I'm purple).

MegaGlest is a 3d real time strategy  game that can be played with up to 8 people (4v4, 2v2, 5v3, etc) over
the Internet. In addition to human vs. human games, Co-op games against the CPU are very challenging, and
fun, thanks to the intelligence of the CPU opponents. Those who enjoy single-player games will also find
MegaGlest a very enjoyable game. The default installation contains enough game content to entertain almost
everyone - and modders and map-makers will find it easy to make new content or improve upon existing
content. MegaGlest features a "master server", so any user who chooses to host his own server (and has
configured his firewall properly) will have his game automatically listed in the MegaGlest master server list
(private network games are also an option).

Some may find what I wrote a bit wordy, and perhaps info about the master server isn't desired there.

[GunChleoc]

Those who enjoy single-player games will also find MegaGlest a very enjoyable game.

This has "enjoy" twice. "Those who" ... "like"? "prefer"? "are looking for"?

[titi]

the new text is much too long for the short description :-/